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Although Hemingway
and Anne LaMott may call the first draft by a different name, I feel my synonym
works just as well. I’m plodding through
the poopy first draft of my memoir now, chapter by chapter, enlivening scenes
here, clarifying details there, and hopefully offering enough insight so that readers
can truly see what it was like attending college as a non-traditional student
and still raising those five children.
Of course, I could tell the
reader my experience in one word: exhausting.
However my fellow memoirists in the writing course I just finished
thought I should be a little more specific.
I’m considering each edit of my manuscript, deciding whether or not a
cut is in order or simply elucidation. I’m not opposed to dropping summary in favor
of a scene. My fellow memoirists enjoyed
the interaction between my children and me as I struggled through entrance to
and classes in my college journey. I find
myself laughing out loud in the library where I sometimes hide to write, and then
can’t wait for dinner that night to tell the family what I wrote about that
day. Pretty soon we’re all reliving the
experience and laughing out loud. This
is what makes my memoir about college different from other college memoirs.
Every writer revises, from experts to beginners. What writing glitches do you deal with in revision? Please share any tips. Thanks.
The more I write, the cleaner my first drafts become. After a few reads, I show it to someone to get feedback for the stuff I can't see. I like the revising phase because at least the manuscript is written... somewhat.
ReplyDeleteGood luck with those revisions!
Thanks, Theresa. I like the revision stage as well for the same reasons. Getting it all out on the page in a somewhat organized fashion is the more difficult part. I also agree that my first drafts are becoming cleaner as I write.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for sharing on my Adventures in Writing blog. Please stop by again.
First of all thanks for stopping by my blog. I'm finally to a point in my life where I think I can write my memoir. I'd be very interested in reading about your process. I have difficulty knowing where to start and often get bogged down just trying to remember details. I'll be following your journey for sure.
ReplyDeleteAbout revision: This is actually my favorite part. Once everything is on paper it's easier to go back and figure out what your really trying to say. I've found I have words I use too often, was and that. Running a find for those words has been a helpful hint that one reader/critiquer suggested.
Happy revising!
Welcome, Pam. Thank you so much for visiting my Adventures in Writing blog. I will continue to talk about what to keep and what not to keep, etc., as I move forward in my memoir about going to college as a mother of five children, second graders up to a ninth grader.
DeleteRevision is my favorite part too, Pam. I finally got what I feel should go into my memoir. Now I start fine tuning it. "Was" and "That" I hate those two. They are everywhere in my manuscript. Thanks for the tip of using the find function.
Thanks again, Pam, for visiting my Adventures in Writing blog. Please stop by again. I'll be sure to visit your blog often as well.
All the best with the revisions. Once a blank page is filled, it's just layering and structuring. I help with that for my authors.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Nas, for visiting my Adventures in Writing blog. I find that once a blank page is filled, I’m a happier person. Layering and structuring, that’s what it’s all about. Your authors are very lucky to have your help.
DeleteThanks again, Nas, for stopping by.
I came looking for a new post :(
ReplyDeleteSorry, Nas. I've been away camping for a few weeks. I'll be posting soon. Thanks for visiting.
ReplyDeleteI can only imagine what it takes to revise a story or, in your case, a memoir. I wish you all the luck as you finish your memoir.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Michelle. Luck can't hurt. This will be a long process. Thanks for visiting my Adventures in Writing blog. Please stop by again.
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